Saturday, December 11, 2010

Faiza Hussain - Silver's Anatomy - Danial Carroll


PANEL 1. Faiza Hussain and Pete Wisdom are watching a flaming trail cut across the sky.

FAIZA:
What is that? A meteor?

PETE:
Whatever it is, it looks like it's going to land in Surrey. We'd better move.


PANEL 2. In the bottom of a smoking crater lays the Silver Surfer. A crowd, including media, has gathered around the crater's edge. Pete and Faiza are at the front.

FAIZA:
Oh, my.

PETE:
This can't be good.


PANEL 3. Faiza and Pete have moved to the Surfer's side. He has a gaping wound across his torso.

PETE:
What could have possibly done this to... him.

FAIZA:
It doesn't matter--I have to try and heal him.


PANEL 4. Faiza is leaning over the Surfer, her hands on his wound. A look of intense concentration is upon her face.

PETE (OP):
Can you even--

FAIZA:
Shh!


PANEL 5. Close up on the Surfer, sitting up.

SILVER SURFER:
Thank you, friends. I owe you a great debt. I--

SILVER SURFER:
I feel... different.


PANEL 6. The Surfer is looking to Faiza, confused.

FAIZA:
I apologise. Being unfamiliar with your race's physiology, I had to alter it in order to heal you.

FAIZA:
For all intents and purposes, you're now--

SILVER SURFER:
Human?


[Did anyone happen to catch the little sci-fi nod?]

2 comments:

  1. I had to double check to make sure that it wasn't Brandon that had written this, haha.

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  2. haha I needed an alien for the story and SS was the first who came to mind :)

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