PAGE ONE (seven panels)
PANEL 1. An extreme close up of Deadpool, heavily blurred.
DEADPOOL:
Wakey wakey.
PANEL 2. Close on Deadpool and Venom's (Flash) heads. Deadpool has slapped Venom across the face.
VENOM:
Hey! We're awake already!
DEADPOOL:
I know. I just like slapping people.
PANEL 3. Wider view, revealing that Venom is bound with very thick chains to a furnace. Deadpool is standing before him. Both are in a non-descript maintenance cellar.
VENOM:
What are you--? How--
DEADPOOL:
Sorry, this page is far too small for a flashback. You'll just have to roll with it.
DEADPOOL:
All you need to know...
PANEL 4. Close on Deadpool, pointing. Despite the mask, you can tell he's smiling proudly.
DEADPOOL:
Is that I'm here to save you.
DEADPOOL:
From the suit.
PANEL 5. Wide view again, with Deadpool pointing up at Panel 2. Venom looks to be struggling against the chains.
VENOM:
I don't need saving. I'm fully in control of the suit.
DEADPOOL:
Are you? Really? I can see a wordballoon that says otherwise.
VENOM:
Wordballoon?
DEADPOOL:
Bah, amateurs.
DEADPOOL:
You said, we're awake, meaning the suit is bonding with you.
PANEL 6. Close on Venom, with one eyebrow raised.
VENOM:
Hmmm...
VENOM:
And how exactly do you plan to save me?
DEADPOOL (OP):
Like this--
PANEL 7. From Venom's POV, we see Deadpool pointing two pistols at us.
DEADPOOL:
Gimme gimme gimme!
This feels far more like a Deadpool script than it is a Venom, but I'm not complaining, Danial because I LOVED it. It actually made me laugh out loud and I NEVER laugh out loud.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it :) I knew as I was writing it that it had become more a Deadpool script. I was suffering some serious writer's block writing Venom for some reason, so when this came to me, I just went with it.
ReplyDeleteYou know, the one thing I do not like about Deadpool is when he references that he is in a comic. However, the way you have handled it here, as a part of the plot but asl oas a joke...man, awesome. Love the script Danial.
ReplyDeleteSure, it's not reall a Venom script, but who am I to criticise anyone for doing that?
So is Deadpool officially the most used character without being chosen yet?