Friday, May 13, 2011

Omega Red - Ghosts - Sime McDonald

PAGE TWENTY-ONE



PANEL ONE
Exterior shot of the Senate Building in the Moscow Kremlin.

CAPTION
The Kremlin.

THE RUSSIAN PRESIDENT (1)
X-Force.



THE RUSSIAN PRESIDENT (2)
More like American Death Force, eh?

PANEL TWO
The Russian President sits at his desk. It's desolate, aside from an ashtray and a thin manila folder. The curtains are drawn. The room is dark. A cigarette is nestled between two fingers on his right hand. His left rests beside the folder. There is someone sitting opposite him - we can't identify who.

THE RUSSIAN PRESIDENT (1)
They come to my country. They kill my citizen!>




THE RUSSIAN PRESIDENT (2)
They have no right!




PANEL THREE
He roughly stamps out his cigarette.

THE RUSSIAN PRESIDENT (1)
And they hide behind their mutants.

THE RUSSIAN PRESIDENT (2)
Because they are not citizens. They are not answerable to international law.

THE RUSSIAN PRESIDENT (3)
They are ghosts.

PANEL FOUR
Omega Red sits opposite the president with his arms crossed. Listening placidly.

THE RUSSIAN PRESIDENT
But we have Ghosts too, eh?

PANEL FIVE
The president flips open the file. From this angle, we can't see its contents.

THE RUSSIAN PRESIDENT
And plenty of targets.

2 comments:

  1. X-Force vs Omega Red. I'd love to see that. Though as much as I love the guy, he may need the help of the Winter Guard :)

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  2. Damn, that's a fine script. You've got a good noir vibe here even though it's just set up for Omega Red to go toe-to-toe with my favourite X team right now.

    I love the use of the word ghost. THis one sizzles with intrigue.

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