Friday, June 10, 2011

X-Men: First Class - Distractions - Danial Carroll



PANEL ONE
Close up on Beast. He is in a laboratory, looking directly at us in strong concentration.


PANEL TWO
Same shot as the last, except that we can see Cyclops entering through a door in the background.

CYCLOPS: Hank?

BEAST: Just a moment, I'm at a crucial point.


PANEL THREE
Beast has turned to face Cyclops, who is a little closer now.

BEAST: Now, Scott, what can I do for you?

CYCLOPS: NASA called. They want to know how the designs are coming along.

BEAST: Ah, yes, Apollo 11.

BEAST: They're coming along just fine. Should be ready within--


PANEL FOUR
Beast has spun back towards us with haste.

BEAST: It's back!

CYCLOPS: I don't understand what you see in it.


PANEL FIVE
From behind Beast, we now see that he is sitting before a 60's-styled TV set. On its screen can be seen the original USS Enterprise.

CYCLOPS (OP): That show will never take off.

BEAST: Shhh.

6 comments:

  1. Nice, fun, change of pace from all the Lets Kill JFK angst, Danial, this was a good character piece and very much of its era. Although I'm not sure NASA would trust a mutant - even a mutant genius - to build their rockets for them.

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  2. Beast would be a fan of Star Trek, wouldn't he? :-P

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  3. @Rol: Maybe not, but I felt I needed another period-specific reference and I've always remembered that the Moon landing was '69, because it was 10 years before I was born :)

    @MK: He is pretty nerdy, so more than likely :P

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  4. The case could be made that if we're in an era where the X-Men aren't public yet and mutants are an 'under the radar' thing, perhaps NASA doesn't know that there's a mutant building their rockets for them. As far as they're aware, it's just the work of Hank McCoy, a young genius and an essential part of the US effort to beat the Commies in the space race.

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  5. Hilarious! I love the twist at the end - of course Hank would be a Star Trek fan. The "That show will never take off" / "Shhh" end is solid gold. Also does a fine job of showing how much smarter Hank is than Scott. :P

    Love the script. Two thumbs way up.

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  6. Very tight stuff here, Danial. You manage to sneak two quality 60s references into this and also drop some quality character for Beast. And you do it so effortlessly. Golden.

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