Friday, July 22, 2011

Atomic Robo - Entangled - Danial Carroll



PAGE TWENTY-TWO (two panels)


PANEL ONE, INSET TOP-LEFT
Close on Robo. He looks worried. If a robot could sweat, he would be sweating.

ROBO: Come one, Robo, you've faced extradimensional creatures before...


PANEL TWO, FULL-PAGE SPLASH
Robo stands on the top of a tall building, looking out at a partially destroyed city. Amongst the buildings of the city are three identical, giant monsters. Doesn't really matter what they look like, but I'm picturing Cthulhu in my head. Robo should look tiny in comparison, near the bottom of the page. His shoulders are slumped.

ROBO (small): ... just never quantum entangled creatures.
ROBO (small): ->sigh<-

CAPTION: To Be Quantinued...

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3 comments:

  1. MK Stangeland Jr.July 22, 2011 at 12:14 AM

    This monster thing have any relation to The Shadow from Beyond Time?

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  2. DanialJuly 22, 2011 at 2:09 AM

    In so much as being of Lovecraftian inspiration, then yes, yes it does :)

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  3. Grant McLaughlinJuly 24, 2011 at 5:23 AM

    I like it, Danial. A good mix of Robo and your own sensibilities. I like the visual, both in the panel layout and the described scene.

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