Friday, July 8, 2011

Invincible - Parody? - Danial Carroll

[I apologize for this lacklustre page, but I'm on vacation at the moment and just whipped it up quickly in between all the fun... plusidontlikethecharacter :P]


PANEL ONE
Close on Mark, out of costume and shouting I'm anger.

MARK: Are you KIDDING me!?!


PANEL TWO
From Mark's POV, we see a man in a tailored suit. He looks apologetic, but also resigned. This is Mark's attorney.

ATTORNEY: I'm sorry, but the court ruled in their favor.

ATTORNEY: It was changed JUST enough to avoid infringement.


PANEL THREE
Close on Mark again, even angrier this time.

MARK: That's BULL$#!?. I want an appeal!

MARK: I don't CARE if they changed the costume and added a few extra powers--


PANEL FOUR
Mark has slammed a comicbook onto the table, the title of which reads, "Superman".

MARK: --That's still ME, dammit!!

3 comments:

  1. I've always found the relationship between comics and copyright to be fascinating, especially some of the earlier cases like the ones you gesture to here. The dialogue is perhaps a little over the top for Mark Grayson, but that doesn't change the fact that it's a fun, lighthearted piece.

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  2. Yeah, fun. Enjoy your holiday, Danial.

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  3. I liked it - however I question Mark's logic. Has his dimension only just Superman, or is he completely oblivious to comics and only just encountering Superman?

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