Monday, September 12, 2011

Aztek – End of Days

1. A wide panel showing the Temple of Quetzalcoatl, and its jungle surroundings.


December 21, 2012.

The final date on the Mesoamerican Long Count calendar.

2. Closer in on the temple, with the door to the temple barely visible. It is open.


Many different theories were thrown about, ranging from the end of the world to a new age of spiritual enlightenment.

Strange that no one could see that it wasn't a calendar at all...

3. Closer in on the door of the Temple. A figure is emerging from it, power surging and crackling from every pore. The ground beneath the figure scorched.


...but a countdown.

4. A close up on the figure emerging from the Temple of Quetzalcoatl. It is Aztek, The Ultimate Man. However, he is now the God Quetzalcoatl. And he is ready for destruction.


It was a warning.


  1. Where's a taoist monk ringing a bell and heralding this arrival.

    I like this page, it's simple, it works, but something doesn't connect for me...don't worry, my page is just as simple so you can trash it on Wednesday :)

  2. Loved the concept for the page and who well it linked into the 2012 end of the world theory. The page itself was tight and well executed, in print this page could have a lot of visual flare. Good stuff.

  3. Another page with a very strong ominous atmosphere that builds quite nicely.

    I love the imagery that final panel description evokes too for some reason.


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