Tuesday, December 13, 2011

Judge Dredd – Quick Response – Ryan K Lindsay

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1. Angle aimed at about mid-chest and down on a flat level. A young boy sits a little bit away from some London rioters, his nose is dripping blood, his shoulders sloop, a bag hangs from his back. A rioter is helping him up.
NO COPY


2. The young boy is being led away but we can see another rioter behind start riffling through the young boy’s bag, pulling out headphones, etc.
NO COPY


3. The rioter is now walking away from the boy. He is holding headphones in his hand and tossing a plastic container away.
NO COPY


4. The rioters legs are still walking but now blood spatters the sidewalk behind him and mists in the air, we can’t see what’s happened to his head, though. Not yet.
NO COPY


5. The rioter has fallen to the ground, his head is pretty well decimated by a bullet. Judge Dredd’s boots are walking over his body, perhaps stepping on him directly.
NO COPY


I think I just didn’t want to write Dredd’s voice for fear of Sly slipping out.

I also wanted to touch on the London Riots, as I am certain others will, but didn’t want it to be heavy handed. Dredd would surely know you don’t reason with these asshats, you just take them out, right?

1 comment:

  1. A terse, silent Dredd is the best Dredd IMO.

    A solid script that encapsulates Dredd's 'take no shit' attitude.

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