Thursday, December 8, 2011

Nova – What’s A Cosmic? – Ryan K Lindsay

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1. We are in Mary Jane’s apartment. Nova is wearing his suit, but his helmet is off and underneath his arm. He looks down at the bench, Mary Jane stands next to him and also looks down.
NO COPY


2. Nova continues to look down. Mary Jane looks at him.
NO COPY


3. Nova looks up, Mary Jane looks down.
Nova:


4 Nova and Mary Jane face each other.
Nova: You don’t really know what it is I do, do you?


5. Nova looks up at the ceiling, exasperated, Mary Jane looks down again.
Mary Jane: So ‘cosmic’ doesn’t mean you can hook my iPad up to my wi-fi. Cool, I get it now. Fine.


Gotta admit, I'm really worried I just wrote a Big Bang Theory script about Nova. I wanted to make this a seething flirt-a-thon between Nova and MJ but just didn't have it in me this week, sorry constant reader.

2 comments:

  1. Ooh, damn, 3 votes and a 2 star consensus. Harsh. I didn't think it was THAT bad. 2.4 stars, at least... :)

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