Monday, March 12, 2012

Loki – Some Assembly Required, Page 2 - Ben Rosenthal


1. This is same panel as 2d from my last script, showing Loki in exactly the same position. However it is not being shown through a monitor. This is shown at the battle.


Hmph. Fools.

2. Tony Stark lays beaten and bruised on some rubble. He is unconscious and sans armour.


Science and magic. When will they learn that these are but one and the same.

3. A shot of Captain America also lying unconscious on the ground. He too is beaten badly, his suit torn. His shield is nowhere to be seen.


And if one has the power of Odin at his disposal –

4. A shot of what has been causing all of the mayhem and destruction. Iron Man’s armour stands in the middle of Times Square, rubble surrounding it. Behind the armour, Loki floats looking on. Just behind the armour lie an unconscious Tony Stark and Captain America. In front of the armour lies a barely conscious Thor, Mjolnir laying a short distance away from him, handle up in the air. The Iron Man armour is reaching for it with one hand, while the other holds Captain America’s shield.


-both are easily controllable.


  1. Aw, man, I see where you're taking this story now, Ben - and I love it. You're also now forgiven for nicking the movie strapline for your title as it fits perfectly.

  2. It's cool to see how the pieces are fitting together (no pun intended-- okay, maybe a little).

  3. Count me so in for this Ben. That final panel is flipping awesome. I hate myself for not thinking of this its so damn cool.

  4. This guy is only getting better and better. The captions are great and the story you're telling is mighty enticing. I'm eager to see what comes next.


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