Like a few of the characters in the Avengers, Hulk isn't someone I've really read a great deal of (though I love Loeb's Grey). So, I went for the zany.
Page One
Panel One
Letterbox panel. It’s early morning and we’re looking out of over the New Mexico desert, the sun high in the sky.
Panel One
Letterbox panel. It’s early morning and we’re looking out of over the New Mexico desert, the sun high in the sky.
ROBERT (CAPTION): General, I’m not exaggerating when I say that what you’re going to see here will change everything--
ROBERT (CAPTION): --the radiance of a thousand suns.
VOICE (CAPTION): Five...
Panel Two
Cut to a close up focusing on the breast of a General's uniform.
GENERAL: God help us all if we’re wrong.
VOICE (CAPTION): Four...
Panel Three
We cut back to the desert. In the distance a FIGURE has materialized as if from nowhere, walking towards us through the heat haze. We can’t make out their features, but whoever it is looks big.
VOICE (CAPTION): Three...
ROBERT(CAPTION): Wait!-- I said wait-- Sam, stop the damn countdown.
ROBERT (CAPTION): What is that?
Panel Four
The figure continues to approach. Their features are still indistinct but we can make out the infamous green and purple.
ROBERT (CAPTION): Is that a man? There’s a man out there!
COMPUTER READOUT (CAPTION): Username: MrFantastic
COMPUTER READOUT (CAPTION): Requesting Operational Log...
COMPUTER READOUT (CAPTION): ...Processing...
Panel Five
Cut back to a medium shot of the General-- more specifically BRIGADIER GENERAL THOMAS FARRELL (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Groves_and_Farrel.jpg).
He turns to the man next to him, one ROBERT OPPENHEIMER, and points towards us.
GENERAL: Oppenheimer--
COMPUTER READOUT (CAPTION): Unauthorised use of Timebridge at 06:00
COMPUTER READOUT (CAPTION): DNA Analysis of perpetrator...
COMPUTER READOUT (CAPTION): ...processing...
Panel Six
Letterbox panel. Cut to the desert again, this time looking forward towards a concrete bunker. The HULK's right leg stands firmly in front of the bunker in the foreground of the left side of the panel.
GENERAL: --what is that thing?
COMPUTER READOUT (CAPTION): Result found: Dr Bruce BANNER.
REED RICHARDS (CAPTION): Bruce, what the hell are you doing?
CAPTION: July 16 1945, Jornada del Muerto desert, New Mexico.
Panel Seven
Inset panel. A close up on the Hulk. Angry.
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