Friday, April 6, 2012

Hulk – In The Hall Of The Mountain King – Shaun Richens.


PANELS 1 and 2 make up a thin top row. Panel 3 is a ¾ page splash.

1. NICK FURY stands onboard the Shield Helcarrier. He has his back to us his head down. He has reached a point he had hoped wouldn’t come.

2. Same as 1. But we pull back slightly we now see a heavily armed SHIELD GUARD facing us. NICK FURY has turned his head slightly to look at the GUARD.

         NICK FURY: Open the hatch. We need to talk.

3. We pull really far back. NICK FURY stands just off centre of the page outside a huge metal door. The door dwarfs him and the two SHIELD GUARDS stationed outside. A small section of the door at head height has been slid open and we can make out the face of Doctor Bruce Banner behind it. He looks nerves and his forehead is sweaty.

        BANNER: Please. I don’t think I can do this. I can’t control it.

        NICK FURY: Banner you’re the only one left who can stop this.

NICK FURY: It’s time to let the world see your other side. It’s time for the Hulk to be a hero.

1 comment:

  1. Solid page.

    I would have liked a bit more back and forth between Fury and Banner but I guess that's one of the down sides to only having one page.


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