Wednesday, April 4, 2012

The Incredible Hulk – Clash of the Juggernauts – MK Stangeland Jr.

(Setting: Somewhere in a remote portion of the Himalayas. The current weather conditions are snowy, and it is dark out. Aside from what’s taking place in the panels, it’s rather picturesque.)

(6 Panels)

Panel 1: Long panel stretching across the page. Landscape shot.

SFX: (Should be small, to indicate it’s taking place far off in the distance.) wump

Panel 2: Identical to the previous panel.

SFX: *Jump!*

Panel 3: Identical to the previous panel.

Panel 4: Identical to the previous panel, aside from JUGGERNAUT COLOSSUS (J-COLOSSUS) landing in the foreground in a massive crash.

SFX: KRUSHchhhhhssssss

Panel 5: Hulk lands near the crater caused by J-COLOSSUS’s landing.


Panel 6: J-COLOSSUS leaps out the crater. His arm is cranked back and ready to swing at HULK once he closes the distance. His eyes are glowing with a red energy, and his Word Balloon should have an irregular boarder and a red tint to confirm that it is CYTTORAK, not COLOSSUS, who is in control of his body.



(Juggernaut: Noun; A huge, powerful, and overwhelming force or institution; A juggernaut, in colloquial English usage, is a literal or metaphorical force regarded as mercilessly destructive and unstoppable.

I briefly considered calling this ‘Clash of the Titans’ instead, but it seemed like that title would be better served for a different story.)


  1. I like the SFX and lettering choices on this page.

    The red tint on the balloons would especially pop against a dark background.

  2. Thanks, MK, I don't have to read Avengers Vs. X-Men now, you've saved me a fortune.


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