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1. Luke Cage is holding up Iron Man's helmet and yelling at Ms Marvel. She is yelling back. They are in the rain within an intergalactic jungle in a strange planet.
Cage: What do you want me to do?
Ms. Marvel: Find him!
2. Ms Marvel is looking off into the foliage.
Ms.Marvel: Stark's out there, in pain, and we have to find him.
3. Cage stands next to Ms. Marvel, they both look out at the dangerous world in front of them.
Cage: We will, but we have to be smart. We have to--
Iron Fist(op): Guys, I think I've got this.
4. Big panel. Iron Fist stands in the rain with an Iron Man gauntlet on - the palm reactor is being powered by Rand's chi power.
Iron Fist: Let's grab Stark, kick some alien ass, kiss the girl, and make the next RandJet home.
Cage(op): What girl?
Iron Fist: I'll find a girl. Let's roll.
This is a 5 star script. At least, for me it is. It isn't the most literary thing I've written, and I don't assume all will bless it with a 5 star rating, but this was one of the most fun things I have ever written on this site. Once this idea came to me, Rand using his chi through Stark's armour, I could not not have a fun time with it. I'd love to write the whole next issue. This, to me, is one of those glorious big ticket Marvel ideas. I would expect this to win an Eisner, I would expect some kid to love it.
I'm not sure if it's an Eisner-winning 5-star, but I DO Think the idea of Rand using chi-power to wield the suit would be something kids somewhere or other would get a kick out of, and it's an idea I though was put together in a fun way here.ReplyDelete