Pilgrimage
Page 1 (6 panels)
1.1
We open on a tight shot of Tony looking dead ahead, straight at us.
TONY (CAPTION): One day every year--
1.2
Fixed panel. Tony brings the Mark 1 Helmet down over his face.
TONY (CAPTION): -- I simplify.
1.3
Wide panel. A worms eye view of Tony in the Mark 1 armour as he touches down somewhere in a desert, sand kicking up from his landing.
TONY (CAPTION): I go back to basics--
TONY (TO HIMSELF): Still works.
1.4
Wide panel. Tony, his back to us, stands before the mouth of the cave where Iron Man was born. He has the Mark 1 helmet tucked under his arm as he looks into the cave.
TONY (CAPTION): --back to the beginning.
1.5
Wide panel, fixed viewpoint. Tony enters the cave, promptly being swallowed up by the shadows.
TONY (CAPTION): I give thanks to the man who saved me--
1.6
Inset panel. Close up of the desert floor in front of the cave and one of the footprints left by the armour.
TONY (CAPTION): -- and the mark he made.
Page 1 (6 panels)
1.1
We open on a tight shot of Tony looking dead ahead, straight at us.
TONY (CAPTION): One day every year--
1.2
Fixed panel. Tony brings the Mark 1 Helmet down over his face.
TONY (CAPTION): -- I simplify.
1.3
Wide panel. A worms eye view of Tony in the Mark 1 armour as he touches down somewhere in a desert, sand kicking up from his landing.
TONY (CAPTION): I go back to basics--
TONY (TO HIMSELF): Still works.
1.4
Wide panel. Tony, his back to us, stands before the mouth of the cave where Iron Man was born. He has the Mark 1 helmet tucked under his arm as he looks into the cave.
TONY (CAPTION): --back to the beginning.
1.5
Wide panel, fixed viewpoint. Tony enters the cave, promptly being swallowed up by the shadows.
TONY (CAPTION): I give thanks to the man who saved me--
1.6
Inset panel. Close up of the desert floor in front of the cave and one of the footprints left by the armour.
TONY (CAPTION): -- and the mark he made.
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