Friday, May 18, 2012

Tony Chu – Beats – Ryan K Lindsay

1. A wide panel showing hands close together, they are in cuffs. The hands have a reddish/purple stain right up them, they have been rubbed with beets and their juices.

NO COPY

2. A man sits in the back seat of a police car. We see most of his skin is stained this reddish/purple blotch. If we can squeeze the corner/side of Tony’s head in the side/corner of the panel as he drives the car, that’s cool, if not then the balloon with point to off panel toward the driver’s seat.

Tony: I can’t believe you thought that would work.

3. Tony’s police car drives toward the police station.

Tony: Behind the cibopath headlines, I’m still a really good cop.
Criminal: Sorry.
Tony: Shut up.
Caption: "Earlier..."
Pretty sure this is my 104th script in 104 weeks. I am so immensely proud of myself. I cannot believe I made it. And I actually think this is a half decent way to bring about such a milestone.

I love CHEW. You should totally buy it, maybe you bought it on the ComiXology sale. I hope you've been exposed to it, it's golden.

1 comment:

  1. Solid page, and one that I think captures Chew's tone and comedic aspects quite well.

    I really want to know what the guy in the back was up to. Heh.

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