Friday, June 8, 2012

RKL - The Final Chapter - Niel J. Jacoby

Full Splash: Ryan riding his horse into the sunset, the viewpoint behind him and the sky in full, beautiful view.

Caption: AND WITH THAT, RYAN TOOK HIS LEAVE FROM THOUGHTBALLOONS.

Caption: HIS WORK LAY ELSEWHERE.

Inset Panel 1: The horse freaks out, and Ryan falls on his ass.

Caption: NO ONE KNOWS WHAT THE FUTURE HOLDS, BUT RYAN KNEW HE WAS BOUND FOR GREAT THINGS.

SFX: BONK!

Horse: NEIII-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-IGGGHHHH!

Inset Panel 2: Ryan is getting up, watching his horse run away. He's not injured, but he's definitely a little sore.

Ryan(thoughtballoon): MAYBE THIS WASN'T THE BEST WAY TO MAKE MY DRAMATIC EXIT...

Caption: BUT WHATEVER AWAITS, THE WRITERS AND READERS OF THOUGHTBALLOONS WILL ALWAYS REMEMBER THE NAME RYAN K. LINDSAY.

1 comment:

  1. Nice. From the emotional to the humours to the not of this reality, the scripts this week have truly been tremendous. Well done all!

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