Monday, June 18, 2012

Skullkickers - Fire and Brimstone - Ben Rosenthal

1.  A massive dragon breathes fire out the front of a castle.  It looks evil and menacing.

2.  The dragon has stopped breathing fire.  It is looking down at two lone figures standing in front of it – Baldy and Shorty.  Smoke comes out of the dragon’s nostrils and it glares at them menacingly.

3.  A shot of Baldy and Shorty staring up at the dragon.  The look slightly concerned at the size of the beast which stands before them.

4.  Same as Panel 3.



  1. Short, but you got the tone down nicely.

  2. You're spot on here with the tone, Ben. It's a nice turn at the end that fits perfectly with the rest of the Skullkickers books. My only nitpick is that that "Shit" should have been censored out with classic comic book profanity symbols, but it's a small point.


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