Panel 1: CLEAN LIVIN' CARNEGIE and his manager/trainer BRUISER are standing in front of a bathroom stall. CARNEGIE is nervous, and BRUISER is reassuring him.
Carnegie: BUT BRUISER, I'M NOT SURE WE'LL BE ABLE TO MAKE THE SWITCH IN TIME!
Bruiser: AH, IT'LL BE FINE. I GOT THE CLEAN SAMPLE RIGHT HERE. JUST GO IN THERE SO THEY DON'T GET SUSPICIOUS.
Panel 2: Carnegie is in the stall, and the door is closed. BRUISER is relaxed.
Carnegie: EEEGGGHHHAAAAAAAA
Bruiser: WHASSA MATTER? TOO MANY LATE NIGHTS? EH-HEH. DON'T WORRY, KID!
Panel 3: Same viewpoint, but zoomed out enough so we can see that steam is rising over the top of the stall. BRUISER is dumbstruck.
SFX: WHIIIIIIIIIIII-
Bruiser: JEEZIS, KID, WHAT'S IN THAT STUFF?
Carnegie: AAAAAAAAAAAGH
HA!
ReplyDeleteGreat work Niel. Think I've got myself another set of characters to steal for up comming scripts (with your permission, of course).
Carnegie and Bruiser are fair game, as long as there's a little "Clean Livin' Carnegie and Bruiser created by Niel Jacoby" caption.
DeleteThe name alone! "Clean L¡v¡n'" Carneg¡e...Laughed about that all the way home! Great Job...
DeleteThat name is pretty ace.
ReplyDeleteGood strip too, bringing the humour (pee) A-game.