(While fighting NITRO
and stopping him from exploding in a populated area, CAPTAIN MARVEL (CAROL
DANVERS) unintentionally absorbed NITROs body due to being in contact with him
when he went boom and her energy absorption powers taking over.
His mind has since
settled into a portion of DANVERS head, though DR. STRANGE and PROFESSOR X are
currently trying to help her get rid of the unwanted guest.)
(8 Panels)
Panel 1: NITRO comes to a rest face-down on the ground
after his opening smack-down from CAPTAIN MARVEL (CAROL DANVERS) on the
previous page.
CAPTAIN MARVEL lands
in the background. A large amount of dirt and dust coming up around her feet
strongly suggest she made a sliding landing.
NITRO: (Small, as though
barely hearable) ahhh…
Panel 2: NITRO gets on one foot as he picks himself
up. One of his hands is doing a ‘blood wipe/blood check’ at his mouth.
CAPTAIN MARVEL: (Off-panel)
Eviction time.
NITRO (1): I thought you’d come.
NITRO (2): Too late. Couldn’t leave now even if I wanted to.
NITRO (3): Nothing left to go back to.
Panel 3: CAPTAIN MARVEL springs forward and hits
NITRO with a cross punch. A tooth or two can be seen flying from his mouth due
to the impact.
NITRO: I’ve made a home here. I’m even…
SFX: WHACK!
Panel 4: NITRO is down on one knee again, leaning
over sidewise as he uses a single arm to keep himself off the ground. A touch
of blood might be visible dripping from his mouth, but nothing that would by
any means be considered excessive.
CAPTAIN MARVEL towers
over him – she looks PISSED OFF.
NITRO (1): ow…
NITRO (2): Stop hitting me.
CAPTAIN MARVEL: Then get out.
NITRO: No.
Panel 5: NITRO stands up, though he’s hunched over as
he hasn’t yet gotten his footing. His arm is in front of his face as he wipes
away whatever’s there.
NITRO (1): I’m planning on expanding. Taking over.
NITRO (2): I may not prefer blondes, but once I’m done I’m
definitely going to have more…
Panel 6: CAPTAIN MARVEL zooms in and hits NITRO with
an uppercut that sends him flying backwards.
SFX: Ka-RAKKkk!
Panel 7: NITRO lands in a heap.
NITRO: ugh!
Panel 8: Close up on NITRO as he tries to pick
himself up again.
NITRO: You should stop that.
(END PAGE)
There's some real play at some high-concept stuff here. It's a great play off Nitro's powers, and I'm glad you used a legacy villain. "Stop hitting me" and the blood-check brought a smile from my face. All in all, this is a nice fight scene with some great moments.
ReplyDeleteExcellent hook to this script and it was neat you used one of Carol's original adversaries.
ReplyDeleteNot to mention this is the guy responsible for Mar-Vell's cancer and death.
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