Friday, September 21, 2012

Judge Anderson - Hands To The Sky - Niel Jacoby

Panel 1: We see a gang emptying a storehouse, and one of the containers is cross-sectioned so we see Judge Anderson hiding inside it. The gang leader is issuing an order, and the underlings are all turned to face him.

Leader: THAT'S IT BOYS, WE'RE ALMOST DONE! ONCE THE LAST OF THE PACKAGES IS LOADED, WE'LL GET A MOVE ON!

Inset Panel: Close-up. Judge Anderson, in the box, is resolute.

Anderson: AH! HERE'S MY CHANCE! THE CONTRABAND IS NEATLY PACKED, AND NO DOUBT THEY'VE LEFT FINGERPRINTS

Inset Panel 2: Anderson, 2 fingers to her left temple, is concentrating. We can see the psychic energy radiating.

SFX: VRUMMMMMMMMMMM

Panel 3: This should take up most of the page. The Leader, the same psychic energy radiating around his head, pulls a gun on the rest of his men.

Leader: EVERYBODY, PUT OUR HANDS UP! WE ARE ALL UNDER ARREST!

Cap: NEXT PROG -
A MIND IS A TERRIFIC THING TO USE!
-OR-
THE MEDIUM AND THE MESSAGE!

1 comment:

  1. Fun idea and great use of Andersons powers, with a very great pay off in that awesome final panel.

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