Wednesday, September 26, 2012

The Rarebit Fiend – Dreampool – MK Stangeland Jr.


(9 Panels)

At the bottom of the page is a single long panel featuring a sleeping DEADPOOL. Thought balloon bubbles come out of his head to create the actual panels, which are framed as being part of his dream.

Panel 1: DEADPOOL stands against a blank white canvas, looking around.

Panel 2: DEADPOOL has his hands cupped against his mouth.

DEADPOOL: Hel-LOOOO!

Panel 3: DEADPOOL looks around again to see if there’s any response.

Panel 4: DEADPOOL is walking across the blank white canvas, waiting to see if anything happens.

DEADPOOL: I said Hel-LOOOO!

Panel 5: DEADPOOL is standing with bent knees as his arms are held up and he shouts into the sky.

DEADPOOL: WHY WON’T ANYTHING HAPPEN TO ME?!

Panel 6: DEADPOOL is standing again, looking frustrated and annoyed by the way he’s standing.

DEADPOOL (1): Worst.

DEADPOOL (2): Dream.

DEADPOOL (3): EVER!

Panel 7: DEADPOOL has the bottom half of his body covered up by the bottom of the dream/thought bubble/balloon. He looks like a mix of disappointed and depressed.

DEADPOOL: *Sigh!*

Panel 8: Similar to the previous panel, but DEADPOOL’s head is leaning now, too.

DEADPOOL: Last time I ever have rarebit before bed.

(END PAGE)

5 comments:

  1. HA! Exactly what you would expect his nightmares to be like... Deadpool strikes again!

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  2. Another week and more Deadpool creeping in. I liked this page more than most Deadpool issues. Great little play around with the theme of the week and the character of Deadpool.

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  3. Nice melding of Deadpool and the week's pick. We can't seem to shake ol' Wade lately. He's continually finding a way to sneak into our scripts. I'll be interested to see his appearance next week...

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  4. Frankly, I'm surprised no one's chosen to give him a week of his own yet. :^b

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  5. Nice solid page that combines the elements of this weeks pick with the specific 'brand' of Deadpool humour.

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