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Set up Markham has been
pulled into a situation involving the Mob trafficking woman into the country.
We come in during the main confrontation between Markham and the Mob Boss, Vito
Gacha.
1.
We are in the office of VITO GACHA, the office
has that kind of vibe. Vito Gacha lies on the floor; he is wearing a fine suit,
white shirt, and black tie. His nose is bleeding from the punch MARKHAM gave him;
some of the blood has splattered onto his crisp white shirt. Vito is on his
back, using his arms to crawl away towards a cabinet. He is facing towards us,
and Markham who is off panel.
VITO:
What
gives you the right to judge me?
You’re
hands are covered in blood.
2.
Same as panel 1. however Vito has crawled further away, his back up against the
cabinet now. The shadow of Markham stretches out towards Vito not quite
blocking him from the light yet.
VITO 1:
I
know the stuff you’ve done Markham.
(LINK)
VITO
2:
Your past's as black as mine.
3.
A worm’s eye view looking up at Markham. He is rim lit with the light behind
him. He holds his pistol in hand outstretched pointing at Vito.
MARKHAM 1:
My
histories pretty dark.
(LINK)
MARKHAM
2:
But
compared to your its no worse than grey.
4.Insert
panel in 3. Same as panel 2. However Vito has raised his hands to shield his
face. Markham’s shadow covers Vito now.
VITO
1: (SMALL FONT)
Please
(LINK)
VITO
2:
Don’t…
Really fine build up of suspense, and flows neatly. Nice, clean script, Shaun.
ReplyDeleteThis is short and snappy-- no drag on this chassis!
ReplyDeleteGood page!
Thanks a lot guys. Wanted to keep things lean and tight this week as my script for next week has a lot going on. haha
ReplyDeleteYeah, nice stuff here, Shaun. You quickly establish the scene and play it out in a quick and concise way. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
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