Wednesday, October 3, 2012

Spider Jerusalem – Peace & Quiet - MK Stangeland Jr.


Spider JerusalemPeace & Quiet - MK Stangeland Jr.

(This script takes place after the conclusion of TRANSMETROPOLITAN.)

(4 Panels)

Panel 1: SPIDER JERUSALEM (SPIDER) sits at his mountain retreat in a zen position without his shirt on.

SPIDER (1): (Thought balloon) Peace & Quiet

SPIDER (2): (Thought balloon) Free of the world, no obligations to anyone.

Panel 2: Repeat of Panel 1, but with an annoyed look on SPIDER’s face.

SPIDER: (Thought balloon) Then I realize how boring it all is.

Panel 3: Repeat of Panel 1.

NINJA (1): (From Off-Panel) GUAAAAAAAHHHH!

NINJA (2): (From Off-Panel) Blughhhh…

Panel 4: Repeat of Panel 3, but with a sinister grin on SPIDER’s face.

SPIDER (1): (Thought balloon) But then the ninjas try to get me.

SPIDER (2): (Thought balloon) And discover my bowel disruption fence.

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4 comments:

  1. This seems like an after credits sequence of a film, it fits in with the over all whole and adds a nice punchy element of humour to the close. Very nice page.

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  2. Take my money right now...
    I.
    Want.
    A bowel disruption fence.

    (The cats are getting into my trash and someone keeps stealing my recyclables.)

    Great postscript, MK.

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  3. Haha. Awesome curveball here, MK. And great use of one of the series' best jokes to support that final moment. Fun stuff.

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  4. The repetition of panels/viewpoint are what sells the page and the humour here. Great use of the technique.

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