Sunday, November 25, 2012

Wally West - Band on the Run - R.A. Wonsowski

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Panel 1:  Establishing shot of the Van Buren Bridge that connects Central City and Keystone City, night.  We are on the Keystone City side which is the more blue-collar industrial town of the two.  The cloudy night sky is flashing lightning in the distance...

CAPTION:  3X2 past Flashpoint.

CAPTION:  "...can't outrun the Sideways Men forever, Wallace..."


Panel 2:  Under the bridge, hiding behind the steel struts, an older man (around 45 years old) with rusty blonde hair greying at the temples.  He's wearing a dark blue body suit, but his face is hidden in shadow.  He has the build of a middleweight boxer in his prime, and his body language is angry annoyance as he points towards us.

BLUE:  ...M space is nothing to them, jumping between branes as easy as meditation...

WORD BALLOON:  (from off-panel)  Maybe for you.  I always had a hard time staying still...

BLUE:  ...and when they find us, they will kill us!  Have you ever seen someone get "folded"?


Panel 3:  A young woman (between 25 and 30) statuesque and athletically voluptuous, with long black curly hair in a dark red bodysuit.  (a good photo reference would be Leryn Franco:  http://www.google.com/search?num=10&hl=en&site=imghp&tbm=isch&source=hp&biw=1440&bih=745&q=Leryn+Franco&oq=Leryn+Franco&gs_l=img.3...1858.4488.0.5537.12.5.0.7.0.1.278.754.2j1j2.5.0...0.0...1ac.1.W_vTcTt4oP8) )  Her face is hidden as well as she comes out of hiding from the rocks.

WORD BALLOON: (from off-panel)  I'm not worried about getting "folded", Vic.  I'm worried about us.  This timeline didn't recall us.

RED:  Is that why I can't remember anything before we got here?  I can't remember anything...

WORD BALLOON: (from off-panel)  The Sideways Men have been screwing with your timeline for a while.  Your history was a Gordian knot.  Now it's a blank.


Panel 4:  A slender man with a runner's build and red hair, face hidden as he peers around a support.  He wears a yellow body suit, and looks ready to make a dash.

YELLOW:  Besides, we can't worry about that now.  All that concerns me right now is finding Gabriel Walker.  Anyways...


Panel 5:  Running out from under the bridge, towards us:  WALLY WEST leading DONNA TROY, and VIC SAGE, up the rocky hill, the bridge and the river behind them.

WALLY:  ...they can't kill you if you were never born.

4 comments:

  1. Loved this page. Firstly, these sideways men, are they a creation of your own? I couldn't find any reference to them. They way they add a great menace to the page and your storyline here that really worked for me.

    The set up, pacing and final reveal are all so well handled. I would love to see how all this played out.

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    1. Alan Moore and Warren Ellis both had written something along the lines of how we would perceive higher dimensional beings as 3-dimensional cross-sections of themselves. The Sideways Men are mine, but inspired by Moore and Ellis's suppositions. If ever I get a chance to do a time-travel story, you bet I'm using them.

      Thanks!

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    2. They make for a great villain. The idea personally brought to mind some of the new Dr Who villains.

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