Monday, December 31, 2012

Halo - The Only Way to be Sure - Ben Rosenthal

1.  The logo to the Master Chef television show.

With only the Final Four remaining who will win the the final cook off and become--

2. Four Halo soldiers stand behind a long counter, side by side. They are dressed in their armour. But are also wearing chef hats and aprons. In front of them are various cooking implements. The four Halo soldiers are in various degrees of mixing/making a cake. It is going horribly. This should be a funny scene.

--Master Chief?


  1. *rimshot*

    Your pun is so cheesily bad, but I love it anyway.

  2. Amazing. This is about as cheesy of a pun I can think of and I totally dig it.

  3. The pun itself is alright, but the imagery sells it.

  4. Dan hit the nail on the head for me the imagery of full armour plus apron and hats is what lifts this pun page up, great stuff Ben.

    Also the question mark at the end made me laugh. The notion that the announcer is just as bewildered by the situation as the reader is a striking one.


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