Monday, December 31, 2012

Halo - The Only Way to be Sure - Ben Rosenthal 




1.  The logo to the Master Chef television show.

CAPTION
With only the Final Four remaining who will win the the final cook off and become--


2. Four Halo soldiers stand behind a long counter, side by side. They are dressed in their armour. But are also wearing chef hats and aprons. In front of them are various cooking implements. The four Halo soldiers are in various degrees of mixing/making a cake. It is going horribly. This should be a funny scene.





CAPTION
--Master Chief?


















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  1. MK Stangeland Jr.December 31, 2012 at 9:52 AM
    *rimshot*

    Your pun is so cheesily bad, but I love it anyway.
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  2. Grant McLaughlinJanuary 2, 2013 at 6:20 AM
    Amazing.  This is about as cheesy of a pun I can think of and I totally dig it.
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  3. Dan HillJanuary 3, 2013 at 3:11 AM
    The pun itself is alright, but the imagery sells it. 
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  4. Shaun RichensJanuary 3, 2013 at 4:36 AM
    Dan hit the nail on the head for me the imagery of full armour  plus apron and hats is what lifts this pun page up, great stuff Ben. 

    Also the question mark at the end made me laugh. The notion that the announcer is just as bewildered by the situation as the reader is a striking one. 
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