Sunday, December 23, 2012

Rudolph - That Nose - Ben Rosenthal

1.  A snowy night.  Deadpool is crouching in the show.

“Rudolph the red-nosed reindeer,
Had a very shiny nose…”

2.  In the distance you can see the slight glow of Rudolph’s nose through the trees and the dark.

“And if you ever saw it…”

3.  The full panel is a sound effect – BANG!

4.  Deadpool is walking away, another job completed.  His rifle slung over his shoulder.

“You would even say that your target has been eliminated and now it is time for beer.”


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