I had a hard time with this one. It was hard to find an 'in' with this character. So I went with THAT costume and why on earth someone would choose to wear it.
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Wide panel: we open on a shot of ELECTRO's COSTUME laid out on a wooden table.
1 ZELINSKY(OFF): I followed your requirements to the letter, Mr Dillon.
2 ZELINSKY(OFF): Even the colours.
Cut to LEO ZELINSKY, cleaning his glasses with a cloth. He wears a woolen jumper and khakis.
We're in a back room of Zelinsky's shop, boxes of material piled up in the corners, shelves of supplies etc.
The centre of the room is dominated by the wooden table.
3 ZELINSKY: Which are, ah, most unorthodox.
4 ZELINSKY: Green and yellow?
Cut to MAX DILLON, out of costume. He stands over the table with his arms folded. He’s smiling to himself.
5 DILLON: It’s perfect. Your reputation is justified, Mr Zelinsky.
Back on Leo, his glasses back on. He smiles, relieved his client is happy.
6 ZELINSKY: It’s a bold design. Unique.
On Dillon. He has picked up the costume from the table, looking at it intently.
7 DILLON: That’s the point.
From Dillon’s POV looking down towards the costume.
8 DILLON: I want them to see me coming.