Monday, January 28, 2013

Electro - His Hands - Ben Rosenthal

1.  The view of Earth from space.

CAPTION (singing)
“He’s got the rivers and the mountains in His hands,”

2.  A closer look at the Earth – something isn't right.  The Earth’s electro-magnetic field is not curved as it usually is (REF: ), but rippled as if being manipulated by something.

CAPTION (singing)
“He’s got the oceans and the seas in His hands,”

3.  Closer yet again and we see what is causing the magnetic fields to be disturbed.  Electro is floating in the stratosphere, arms outstretched and using his heightened electric based powers to disturb the Earth’s magnetic field.

CAPTION (singing)
“He’s got you and me in His hands,”

4.  A close up of Electro’s scarred face.  He wears an evil smirk, thinking about the damage he can accomplish now that the entire planet’s electromagnetic field is under his control.

CAPTION (singing)
” I've got the whole world in My hands.”


  1. This is exactly what I meant: with just a little push, Electro can be a bloody scary antagonist. A fine example, Mr. Rosenthal...

  2. One of the coolest things I have ever read of yours Mr Rosenthal. This is a huge concept that I just adore. You take Electro's power set and ramp it up to its highest degree. The scary nature of his powers plus the use the song 'He's got the whole world in his hands' just makes for a pretty terrifying page.

  3. This was exceptionally creepy.

    And I never thought I'd say that about a page with Electro on it.

  4. Whoa. Way to think big, Ben. The story possibilities are legion, and your captions here really hit home how creepy / awful this is.


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