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Panel 1: Spider-Ock stands outside in the wintry streets of New York City, taking a deep breath of the cold afternoon air.
SFX: SNNNNNFF
Caption(SP-OCK): I'VE GOT A NEW, YOUNG BODY WITH A NICE SET OF SPIDER-POWERS.
Inset Panel: Sp-Ock looking down at the web-slingers on his wrists.
Caption(SP-OCK): IT'S HIGH TIME FOR A LITTLE JOYRIDE.
Panel 2: Sp-Ock swinging through the city in Spider-Man's costume.
Sp-Ock: WOO-HOOO!
Panel 3: Sp-Ock moonwalking upside-down on the ceiling of Peter's apartment.
Sp-Ock: WOO-HOOO!
Panel 4: Felecia Hardy has just gotten back to her apartment after a long day of burgling. We can see Sp-Ock in the window.
Sp-Ock: WOO-HOOO!
Panel 5:Felecia turns to the window, startled and angered, as Sp-Ock quickly pulls himself up on his web-line.
SFX: ZZ-ZZRP!
I'm having trouble reconciling the vision of Otto having...fun?
ReplyDeleteOther than that this is a good page with the last two panels being on the money visuals and humour wise.
I'm with Dan, I liked the page as it stands and each panel is fun and makes for a fun gag that is inline with your concept. However it doesn't feel very Otto. I thought after your opening gambit with his whole taking this young body for a joyride thing you might have taken Otto to see a science lecture or something. haha.
ReplyDeleteBut the page is totally fun and works, just not what I expected.