PAGE NINE – 3 PANELS.
Layout.
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1. Ext. Mid
shot of the UNKNOWN SOLDIER, he sits, back against a thick tree. His eyes
closed, head looking down at the floor, his palms resting against his temples
It’s the break
of dawn and the sun is just rising. A yellow hue shimmers over the panel.
CAPTION:
672
Hours since Doctor Parker’s horrific discovery.
CAPTION
UNKNOWN SOLDIER:
For freedom, against terror. These are the causes
men and women are given to fight.
2. Ext. Full
shot of the UNKNOWN SOLDIER as he gets to his feet. One hand pressed against
the tree.
The sun rises
higher and the panel shifts into an orange hue.
CAPTION
UNKNOWN SOLDIER:
It’s all just politics though. Greed, hunger for more.
These are the true ways of war.
3. Ext. We pull
way back. The UNKNOWN SOLDIER stands alone in CENTRAL PARK NEW YORK CITY. The
skyline of the city dominates the panel. Buildings burn all around, and smoke
pours into the sky.
Military
helicopters dot the skies; they are flying around like lost children.
The sun crests
the horizon casting the panel into a hellish shade of red.
CAPTION UNKNOWN SOLDIER:
This time we just hunger to survivor. To out live
what our greed has unleashed.
CAPTION UNKNOWN SOLDIER:
We fight so that we are not forgotten.
I dug the description of the helicopters over the city. Nice work. There was also some good stuff going on in the captions here too.
ReplyDeleteI'm unsure how this intersects with the main narrative but craft-wise this was good stuff.
So 28 days later, then?
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