Friday, March 15, 2013

Rainbow Dash - Neck and Neck - Niel Jacoby

2 Page Splash: A collage of moments in the Flash and Rainbow Dash's race around the world. Should include:
  • Flash leapfrogging Rainbow Dash
  • Rainbow Dash leaping over the Great Wall of China, while Flash just vibrates through it.
  • Flash and Dash  looping around and around in a London roundabout
  • Flash and Dash running across the Washington Monument reflection pool. Flash is walking on the water, while Dash is swimming across, cross
Inset Panel 1(top left corner): The Flash and Rainbow Dash are lined up, poised to begin a race.
NO COPY
Inset Panel 2(bottom right): Flash and Dash are exhausted, drinking water after the race.
Flash:...BEST 2 OUT OF 3?
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5 comments:

  1. Shaun RichensMarch 19, 2013 at 4:54 AM

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  2. Shaun RichensMarch 19, 2013 at 5:07 AM

    Just a great concept Niel. Brilliant choice of insert panels, the Flash's final line is bang on for the character and just made me smile. Wonderful double page splash, they take up a lot of comic book retail space so need to be worth it, this is!

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  3. Dan HillMarch 19, 2013 at 9:15 AM

    Whilst this is technically two pages, I do like the concept. It has a light tone/feel to it and the visuals are great too.

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  4. American Zombie (R. A. Wonsowski)March 19, 2013 at 12:07 PM

    Jeez, Niel, great spread. Has that great Silver Age feel with the right MLP attitude. Solidly fun.

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  5. Grant McLaughlinMarch 21, 2013 at 8:34 AM

    Super cute, Niel. Way to use the overtired "Flash races someone" trope and make it feel fresh. Well done, sir.

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