Friday, March 22, 2013

You Aren't Fooling Anybody, Charlie Brown - Niel Jacoby

Panel 1: Charlie Brown stands in front of a mirror, perplexed, holding a comb.
Panel 2: Charlie Brown has combed his few hairs into a sort of mohawk thing.
Panel 3: The hair bounces back into the old configuration.
Panel 4: Charlie Brown walks away, dejected.


  1. Cute. simple idea that you play just right. I love how you focused on his hair, looking at the design for Charlie its a standard out feature and a fun little element to play around with.

    Great choice to keep it almost silent, that sfx followed by the last beat in panel 4 are what sell the whole page and only work 'cus you play it silent.


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