Monday, April 15, 2013

Masks and Mobsters - Down - Ben Rosenthal



1. Bobby from behind. He is putting his trench coat on. 

CAPTION - BOBBY 
It's down to this. Down to me. 

2. His Hand reaches for his gun on a table. 

CAPTION - BOBBY
Months I've been working on them. Gaining their trust. 

3. Bobby is putting on his hat, back still to us 

CAPTION - BOBBY
Now it's time.  

4.  A reveal of Bobby with a Domino mask on. 

CAPTION - BOBBY 

That's the thing about dominoes. You just have to topple one, and the rest fall.


4 comments:

  1. Nice page.

    I think p1 could have done with some description of the setting (I had pictured it as an external shot until the table was mentioned)

    Other than that, nice work... raises questions/interest for what happens next.

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  2. I dig the last line on this one. It ties in with the reveal nicely.

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  3. That last line is pure gold Ben and sells your whole set up.

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  4. That last line is a big winner. Way to pack in such a sweet double entendre there. It's also a pretty flashy page, as this would be a pretty big deal if Bobby donned a mask. Nice.

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