(6 Panels)
Panel 1: CONAN, located in a desolate dungeon and
fighting a giant snake, rolls to grab his sword.
Panel 2: CONAN rolls to his feet with sword in hand as
the giant snake comes down on him with its mouth open.
Panel 3: The snake comes down on CONAN and closes its
mouth.
SFX: crash!
Panel 4: The snake comes up from the ground.
Panel 5: CONAN’s sword sticks up through the top of
the snake’s head, with bits of blood, brain matter, and other gooey bits stuck
to it. The snake has gone wide-eyed
from its impromptu lobotomy.
SFX: SHING!
Panel 6: CONAN swings the sword down to leave the
upper half of the giant snakes head in two, with all the disgusting splatter
one would expect from it as CONAN starts to pop out of his fallen foe.
CONAN: CROM!
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Mk you show case a real knack for action writing here. Your panels are short but expertly written, you can visualise everything you want whilst keeping the combat and action as pace it should be on film. A straight forward page but one written with flair and confidence, which is always great.
ReplyDeleteSolid action piece with a nice smattering of gore.
ReplyDeleteCool page MK. Feels like the sort of scene a Frazetta painting would be depicitng
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