Friday, June 7, 2013

Johnny Storm - Slow Burn - Niel Jacoby

Panel 1: the Fantasticar is crashed in the arctic. THING, MR. FANTASTIC, and SUE STORM are unconscious. JOHNNY is worried. They are not nearly dressed for this weather.

Johnny: YOU CAN MAKE IT THROUGH, JOHNNY. JUST STAY CALM.

Johnny: YOU JUST NEED TO GET THEM TO SHELTER.

Panel 2:  Johnny has set up a circle, with Thing, Mr. Fantastic, and Sue circled around him at a safe distance while he burns in the middle to warm them. We can see the faint forms of wolves on the horizon.

Johnny: JUST... JUST START CONCENTRATING, JOHNNY.
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WE CAN ALL SURVIVE.

3 comments:

  1. Cool ticking clock set up.

    A low key survival movie - like The Grey but with the FF :D

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  2. Short but sweet. Great focus on Johnny and his family.

    Brian mentioned the Grey, but what came to my mind was The Impossible, about the tsunami of 2004. The one son who is a bit of a berk to everyone, really goes to outstanding lengths to get his family back together...

    Anyway, Mr. Jacoby, classic family page.

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  3. Short, but that's a great visual on Panel 2. And, like any FF page should be, it's all about family.

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