Friday, June 14, 2013

Storm - Thunder and Lightning - Niel Jacoby

Full splash: Storm and Jushin Thunder Liger standing back-to-back, surrounded by The Brotherhood of Evil Mutants.

Caption: SURROUNDED BY THE BROTHERHOOD, WITH ALL HER ALLIES OUT OF COMMISSION, CAN STORM, THE MISTRESS OF METEOROLOGICAL MAYHEM, TEAM UP WITH JUSHIN THUNDER LIGER, THE MASTER OF THE SHOOTING STAR PRESS AND THREE-TIME BEST OF THE SUPER JUNIORS CHAMPION, TO SAVE THE EARTH FROM ULTIMATE DOOM?

Caption: CONTINUE ON AND SEE, GOOD READER, IN THIS STORMALICIOUS 3-PART NOVEL:

Story logo: THUNDER AND LIGHTNING!

2 comments:

  1. I like the Silver Age style alliteration here, but I'm not sure of anything else.

    I would imagine it's because I don't know who Justin Liger is. :-(

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    1. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jushin_Liger

      And yeah, this was not one of my better pages.

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