Saturday, July 6, 2013

Gwen Stacy - ...a-a-a-and, just in time for the sequel... - R.A. Wonsowski

Panel 1 - PETER PARKER stands on a fluffy cloud against an unnaturally blue sky.  His hands are in his pockets as he looks at his shoes.

PETER:  So...

PETER:  This isn't so bad...

PETER:  ...aside from the fact that Otto is living my life...

Off-Panel:   Face it, tiger - -


Panel 2 - From over PETER's shoulder, we see GWEN STACY, standing in front of the gates of Heaven, in a very John Romita, Sr. type way, in the exact outfit she wore when she died.  She is glowing and beautiful.

PETER:  (happily surprised) Gwen!!

GWEN:  - - You hit the jackpot.

GWEN:  I just talked to "You know who", and guess what?


Panel 3 - Close-up, GWEN's lips to PETER's ear.

GWEN:  It's gone too far.

GWEN:  (small lettering) You have to go back!


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