Friday, July 19, 2013

Queen and Country - Oh Be-have - Niel Jacoby

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1:  Interior of the SIS office. The minders are going through paperwork, and Paul Crocker has just entered the room. There is one empty desk.

Crocker: AFTER THE RECENT SPATE OF FATALITIES OUR AGENCY HAS EXPERIENCED, I'VE HAD NO CHOICE TO TURN TO A SEPARATE AGENCY FOR A REPLACEMENT.

2: The door is beginning to open, but we cannot see who is behind it.

Crocker(OP): AGENT AUSTIN POWERS.

3: Austin Powers bursts through the door with his usual flair and exuberance.

Austin: YEAH, BAY-BAY, YEAH!

4: We see the entire office, as Tara and the other Minders are stunned.
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5 comments:

  1. MK Stangeland Jr.July 19, 2013 at 9:02 PM

    Oh, this can not possibly end well... :^b

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  2. American Zombie (R. A. Wonsowski)July 20, 2013 at 12:36 AM

    I cannot stop thinking of the possibilities in dialogue alone...So. Agent Tara Chance...me....a dirty Minder is a terrible thing to waste...

    Brilliant crossover. Great mojo.

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  3. American Zombie (R. A. Wonsowski)July 20, 2013 at 12:36 AM

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  4. Brian MantonJuly 20, 2013 at 5:44 PM

    Haha. Nice.

    I think the cap in p2 should move to p3 as you give away your reveal before we see him.

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  5. Dan HillJuly 23, 2013 at 3:20 AM

    Well, it's different...

    The panel switch with 2 and 3 would have worked better I think as Brian suggested.

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