PAGE
TWENTY-ONE – 5 PANELS.
All
page wide panels.
21.1
A
large clenched fist rockets into the side of KICK ASS’s jaw knocking it off
centre. A spray of blood and saliva erupt from Kick ass’s mouth.
CAPTION
KICK ASS:
I’m
reminded of when I read Old Man Logan.
21.2
Kick
ass is doubled over as a second fist connects with his stomach in a thundering
uppercut.
CAPTION
KICK ASS:
When
I saw what it took to make Wolverine stop poppin’ his claws, it made me wonder.
CAPTION
KICK ASS:
What
would take to make me give this up?
21.3
The
elbow of a second attacker is being driven down into the spine of Kick ass as
he tries to get back to his feet. His jaw bloodied and bruised.
CAPTION
KICK ASS:
The
answer terrified me.
CAPTION
KICK ASS:
The
clear realisation that there’s only one way I’d ever stop.
21.4
From
Kick ass’s POV looking up at a crowd of attackers surrounding him. Some of them
have their boots raised off the ground ready to come crashing down on to his
skull.
CAPTION
KICK ASS:
The
only end to this career path is the one luxury Logan never had.
21.5
Black
Panel.
CAPTION
KICK ASS:
Death.
I like how you evoke Kick-Ass's own comic fandom, and there's something powerful in his realisation, but you could get that across without the final caption, and just let the readers come to that conclusion themselves.
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