Wednesday, August 7, 2013

The Lone Ranger – The William Tell – MK Stangeland Jr.


(8 Panels)

Panel 1: A BANDIT lights a batch of three sticks of dynamite tied together.

Panel 2: The BANDIT throws the stick of dynamite.

Panel 3: The LONE RANGER aims at the flying stick of dynamite.

Panel 4: Close up on the barrel of the LONE RANGER’s gun, looking down it at the LONE RANGER takes aim.

Panel 5: The LONE RANGER fires his gun.

SFX: BANG!

Panel 6: The bullet flies through the dynamite’s fuse, effectively disarming it.

Panel 7: The BANDIT looks at the falling dynamite with a wide-eyed look of shock.

Panel 8: TONTO slugs the BANDIT across the face with a hook.

SFX: WAK!

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3 comments:

  1. American Zombie (R. A. Wonsowski)August 7, 2013 at 11:53 AM

    HA! Really great page. Well choreographed action, and Tonto is the cherry on top.

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  2. Dan HillAugust 11, 2013 at 7:50 PM

    The beat at the end makes the page.

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  3. J.D. CoughlanAugust 12, 2013 at 1:32 AM

    Excellent action, and great showcase of the Lone Ranger and Tonto's talents.

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