Friday, September 6, 2013

Armor - Reach Out And Crush Someone - Niel Jacoby

Panel One: Armor is in the X-Mansion's Danger Room, and a robot is about to fire a missile at her. She has her arm extended, palm out.

Caption(ARMOR): I DON'T EXACTLY KNOW WHEN I DISCOVERED IT.

Panel Two: Her armor's arm extends out and through the robot.

Caption(ARMOR): BUT I'LL ALWAYS REMEMBER WHAT HAPPENED.

Panel Three: Logan and Professor X are in the Danger Room observation facility. Logan is mildly interested, Professor X is horrified.

Logan: DAMN. DIDN'T KNOW SHE COULD DO THAT.

Professor X: OH NO.

3 comments:

  1. I think I like this script, but its kind of fuzzy on the details and what's happening. I think it would probably work better if there were a touch more information present to help clarify things.

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  2. HA! I read this in Hugh Jackman and Patrick Stewart's voices, and it completely sold me on it. I'm a sucker for the Danger Room anyway...Nicely done, sir...

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  3. A clever little three beat page. Each panel works as a great scene on its own and flows super cleanly. Also as Ray said the Danger Room is always a winner for me.

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