Friday, September 13, 2013

Killeroo - Wallaby Champ - Niel Jacoby

Panel 1: top down view of a ring of motorcycles, forming an impromptu arena. Kangaroos and their motorcycles are on the viewer's right, with wallabies and their motorcycles on the viewer's left. Killeroo and the Wallaby Champ are the only animals in the ring, with the rest of their gangs on the outside. They're staring each other down.

Caption(Killeroo): WALLABIES. THE SMALLEST MACROPODS IN THE WASTELAND DOWN UNDER. BUT THAT DOESN'T MAKE THEM ANY LESS OF A THREAT.

Caption(Killeroo): WHAT THEY LACK IN BULK, THEY MAKE UP FOR IN TECHNICAL SKILL. THEY CAN MAKE THE LARGEST ANIMAL BEG FOR MERCY.

Panel 2: We see the bloodied face of Killeroo. He's taken a beating, but he's still fired up.

Caption(Killeroo): ONE FALL EACH. THE NEXT ONE DECIDES IT ALL.

Panel 3: We see The Wallaby Champ, holding up countless belts made from the pelts of his previous opponents. He also shows signs of having taken a beating, but he's playing to his gang.

Caption(Killeroo): I'M ABOUT TO BE THE FIRST ANIMAL TO TAKE DOWN THE WALLABY CHAMP.

2 comments:

  1. A down and dirty idea. The tone hits home perfectly, and the idea is such a neat one that it feels like it should have already been done.

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