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Panel 1: Kate Bishop, in normal dress, is locking the door of Clint's Bed-Stuy apartment. She does not have her bow and arrows with her.
NO COPY
Panel 2: Two men are sitting in a forest green Cadillac Eldorado. Think this. The man in the driver's seat, the arranger, is a dark-haired man in black sunglasses wearing a Bluetooth headset. The man in the passenger's seat, the client, is a pudgy, middle-aged man, the kind of man you could imagine leading a company in the Honorable Mentions of the Fortune 500. He's wearing coke-bottle glasses. They both are wearing all black tactical gear and are packing heat. There's an attache case on the client's lap.
Arranger: THE BOSS WANTS 50 MILLION UP FRONT, AND A SECOND 50 IF YOU MAKE THE KILL. I'LL ASSUME YOU'VE GOT THE FULL HUNDRED IN THAT CASE?
Client: Y-YES.
Arranger: GOOD. THEN WHEN SHE WALKS OUT THAT DOOR...
Panel 3: an archer stands in the window at the end of the hallway where Kate is exiting the door.
Caption(Arranger): "... THE HUNT BEGINS."
Panel 4: The archer looses an arrow.
SFX: TWINNG!
Panel 5: The arrow lands about a foot in front of Kate's face, as a banner unfurls, reading:
THINK FAST:
YOUR LIFE DEPENDS ON IT
Panel 6: A map of the area around Hawkeye's apartment. There is a mile radius around the apartment shaded purple, with the area around it a light blue. In the legend, the purple should be "Danger Zone" and the blue is "home free". There should be a marker for the target range Kate has her arrows stored, at about halfway between the apartment and the line dividing Danger Zone and home free. Kate's location is marked with a small pictogram of her face, and the client and arranger's location should be marked with a set of sunglasses identical to those worn by the Arranger.
Cool page Niel. Would be cool to see the map updated with icons as the story progressed.
ReplyDeleteAnother great example of Fraction and Aja's style here, with the map. Nice premise behind it too, with Kate turning the tables.
ReplyDeleteSmart page. Here's what I like about your pages in general, you're very adept at the "show, don't tell" rule - well crafted, and yes, agreed, you channel Aja's strengths very well.
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