Saturday, October 26, 2013

The Simpsons – Secrets & Lies – Brian Manton

9 panel grid

Security cam angle of Bart sitting in Homer’s control room at the power plant. He is typing on Homer’s computer.

Bart:  D-O-N-U-T-S

Medium shot of Bart, looking determined and vengeful.
We can see the door is closed behind him.

Computer (OP, jagged):  “Password Accepted”

Cropped view of the screen - an email compose window.

Subject: You Suck!

Same shot as p2.
Medium shot of Bart, laughing to himself.
We can see the door is closed behind him.

Computer (OP, jagged):  “Message Sent”

Bart:  Mwahahahaaa!

Large panel. We can see a list of Homer’s emails. The layout is like gmail format where we see: sender name - subject in bold - and a snippet of message content. The first message is highlighted as new.

Computer (jagged):  “You have one new message.”

UNREAD: Lenny & Carl - Secret Plan - Meet us at the tire fire at midnight. Bring the you-know-what...

Marge - Hi Homie, I’m emailing you - did you get it?

Lisa - Act of Futility - This is a reminder to come to my recital on Tuesday.

UNREAD: All Staff Distributor - URGENT: Safety Precaution - Immediate action required...

El Barto - El Barto - El Barto.

Canteen - Stop it - Just stop it.

Flanders - Hididdleeho Neighborino - Isaiah 43:25-26 "I, even I, am he who blots out your transgressions...

Bart (OP):  Secret plan, eh?

Same shot as p2/4.  Homer is coming through the door in the bkg. His eyes are blocked by the lid of the open donut box he is carrying.  Bart looks over his shoulder, startled.

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