Monday, November 25, 2013
Boomerang - BOOMERANG! - Ben Rosenthal
1. Fred Myers sits at a desk, pen in hand and a blank piece of paper in front of him. He is scratching his head, thinking.
FRED
Boomerang. Boomerang.
2. A tight shot of Fred's face - it's a light bulb moment.
FRED
That's it!
3. Fred is scrawling feverishly on the page in front of him.
FRED
That's what I'll call it!
4. The page has one word written on it - BOOMER-SANG
FRED (off panel)
A boomerang that emits a sonic vibration to knock anyone off their feet!
5. Same as Panel 4. Fred's hand is scrunching up the page. It is a stupid idea.
FRED
Just like a......boomerang.
6. Fred is tossing the screwed up page over his shoulder, discarding it.
FRED
Why does everything have to be a pun?
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