Saturday, November 30, 2013

Boomerang – The fun don't start til M.O.D.O.K. gets here – Brian Manton


1.
Spider-man tied to a chair. His mask is rolled up half way and there is a ballgag in his mouth. Boomerang, wearing jeans and a white t-shirt, is walking out the door in the bkg.

2.
Boomerang is about to leave the store. We see that his nose is split and his t-shirt is soaked in blood. The wall behind his is decorated with a confederate flag, a US flag and a selection of license plates.

Spider-man (OP):  MMMmmmmMMMMMMM MMMM MMMMMM!

3.
Same shot, but he looks back hesitantly.

Spider-man (OP):  mmmmMMMM MmmmMMNNNN!

4.
Boomerang picks up a Hammer from counter, testing its weight.

5.
Laying the hammer back on the counter with his left hand, be picks up a baseball bat with his right.

6.
Holding bat with both hands, he notices a chainsaw on one of the low shelves.

7.
Holding the chainsaw now, he swings it, testing the motion.

8.
Angle looking down at Boomerang from a high shelf. He looks toward camera. He holds the chainsaw low in one hand.

9.
From his POV now, an ornate boomerang on the shelf.

1 comment:

  1. I'm usually slow to catch these things, but this one I got on the second panel, and kept chuckling throughout.

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