Sunday, November 17, 2013

Doc unknown – In Hellfire Over The City - Shaun Richens.


PAGE TWETNY ONE – 7 PANELS.

21.1
Wide panel. Ext. A ZEPPELIN drifts through the sky above Gate city. It is ablaze, smoke billows from the top of it. A Nazi swastika motif runs down the side of the Zeppelin.

DOC UNKNOWN (Inside the zeppelin):
Sorry I can’t stick around general.

21.2
Cut to an elderly NAZI GENERAL, he wears a full SS uniform. His left eye is robotic and one of his hands is huge and robotic too. The general leans on the huge wooden wheel that is the helm of the zeppelin. Sweat pours down his brew.

NAZI GENERAL:
I will be forever remembered as the man who took herr unbekannt down in a blaze of glory.

21.3
DOC unknown stands on the bridge of the zeppelin. He stands in an open doorway opposite the general; the open sky is all that’s behind him. Some smoke from the blaze hangs in the otherwise clear blue sky.

DOC UNKNOWN:
It’s Doc unknown actually, my dear general.

21.4
Small panel. Doc unknowns hand on the handle of his holstered weapon.

NO COPY.

21.5
Small panel. Close up on the Nazi general. The evil smirk on his face shows off his yellowing fang like teeth.

NAZI GENERAL:
Ha. Going to shoot me boy? I thought that was beneath a “hero” like you?

21.6
Cut back to doc unknown in the doorway to the sky. He has pulled out his weapon; it’s his signature grappling hook, the silver hook gleams and shines.

DOC UNKNOWN:
Why do men like you always think of violence first?

DOC UNKNOWN:
Auf wiedersehen.

21.7
The empty doorway looking out into the sky above Gate City.

NO COPY.

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