Thursday, December 19, 2013

Bandette – Voleur De Performance - Shaun Richens

PAGE ONE – 6 PANELS.

1.1
Ext. The rooftops of Paris late at night during a beautiful full moon. Our young heroine BANDETTE, in full get up gives chase to a striking woman, MISS MIME, as she dashes gracefully across the tiled roofs towards us.

Miss Mime is a slender young woman. She wears a black and white mimes outfit with full white face make up. Her lips are bright red however and she has a small red love heart beauty spot on her cheek. Her hands are gloved and she carries a small brown pouch.

BANDETTE:
Madam, you are sure of foot and have the grace of a dancer for sure.

1.2
Close up on Bandette, a sly smile on her face.

BANDETTE:
But you are not sly like a fox or cunning as a cat like little old me.

1.3
Two shot of Bandette and Miss Mime, they have both both stopped running and now face each other on the rooftop.

BANDETTE:
Very sensible my dear. You have decided to give yourself up, no? And return the goods you stole from me.

BANDETTE:
It was a bother trying to acquire that pouch of goods you now hold.

1.4
Close up on Miss Mime. She holds her index finger up to her lips telling Bandette to be silent.

NO COPY.

1.5
Miss Mime tosses the pouch over the side of the building and turns to run in the other direction.

NO COPY.

1.6
Close up on a smiling Bandette.

BANDETTE:
Such a shame. You are a feisty vixen. We could have been such great pals.

BANDETTE:
ça ne fait rien


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