1 – A big, wild blizzard. A real
white out. Snow's flying everywhere, but there doesn't appear to be
anything to see.
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2 – The arctic winds continue
unabated. But in the distance, a haggard figure walks towards us.
His clothing is ripped to shreds and he seems to be bleeding heavily.
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3 – The figure is nearer to us. Near
enough to see that it is Skinner Sweet. While he's in a mighty bad
way, he looks upwards towards something off panel with an expression
that is a mixture between pleasure and relief.
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4 – Skinner has passed our point and
is now walking away, near the distance with a small red trail behind
him. Towards the side of the panel, the legs of a large sign are
visible (although not the sign itself).
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5 – Pull back a bit more, we can
finally see the sign itself. It reads: “You are now leaving
Canada. See you again soon!”. Skinner Sweet is gone from view and
the blustering snow has erased any evidence of his being there.
SKINNER SWEET (tailless): Not if I can
help it.
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